Saturday, 16 March 2013

AHMAD IZZAT ASYRAF MAZUKI 19094

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Quitting Jobs After First Delivering Of Baby For Women

          Do you know that delivering a baby can cause a woman less energy than before? A woman less energy than before delivering the fist baby because she losses one of the brain neurons, that's why a woman become weaker after delivering a baby. I definitely agree that a woman should quit her job after delivering a baby. It is a significance for a mother to quit her job after delivering first baby for the baby's growth, care of the baby, and the lasting of the marriage.

             The growth of the baby is important to make sure the baby grows up completely like another kids. A mother should give breast milks for the baby for the development of baby's brain that is DNA. If the baby's brain have an enough nutrients, the healthy of the baby will be guaranteed. Furthermore, maybe the baby will have high level of intelligence in the future. Besides, breast milk give a good protein supplement for the baby so that the height of the baby did not be stunted. If there is lack in milk feeding, the baby maybe will have dwarf symptom or elephant disease.

             After that, the care of the baby should be perfect enough, specially, the hygiene of the baby. A baby has a very low level of body immunity. So, he could be infected by bacteria easily. However, it could be prevented by taking care of the baby's cleanliness. Such as, immediately wash his feces after he defecates. With this, the skin of the baby can be prevented from the spreading of the ringworm bacteria. So, the baby will always be happy because he does not fell any pain. Besides, the baby's wearing also should be tidy to prevent defamation from spreading about parents that do not care about their children. These could humiliate us as parents for those who had been parents.

          The care of a baby also make an important role for the lasting of a marriage. This is because, someone who does not know how to manage a baby can be left by her husband or his wife. This case happens because the respect to his partner decrease. Besides, a husband who has a high salary income usually does not allow his wife to work. So, a wife should be skillful enough to take care of her baby. For those who do  not know how to handle a baby yet, he or she should make a preparation from now because there is always a time to learn a new thing. But, there are also a few working couples that have a good relationship between each other also having a healthy and nice baby. However, their discipline and integrity are high enough.

          In a nutshell, these arguments depends on the person. If she thinks she cannot bear the burden, she should quit but if she thinks she can, just continue working. That's why we need to be careful in choosing a wife, think twice before choosing, because we have to live with our wives until we die. So, choose the right woman for our enjoyment in life.

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