Monday, 18 March 2013

CHOK LI QI 19154

  
Argumentative Essay

Task : Women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of  baby . Do you agree or disagree ? Write an argumentative essay with a suitable with not less than 350 words .

Title : Should women quit their job after first delivery ?

  A plethora of responsibilities arise for a woman after giving birth their first children , whether she should quit job for taking care of her child or continue her career for the sake of the better future . In my stand , I think that the idea of a woman should continue her career after her first delivery is really feasible . Furthermore , women should continue their career as they can financially support their family , they will have finance freedom as well as they can contribute to the development of the country .

  First and foremost , women can financially support her family by having a job . Women will be paid for their work when they have a stable job . Due to the recurrent inflation of routine items , the net price of those necessary routine items are increasing tremendously . Thus , with the double income in a family , the burden of a husband to support the expenditure of a family can be greatly reduced .

  On top of that , women can have finance independent if they have a job to own a living . They can save their own income as savings in the bank to earn extra interest of savings . They can also use the savings they have  to go for a travel to release their tension or even buy things they prefer .
With that , women can also have their own entertainment and enjoyable lifestyle.

  By having a job , women can also play a crucial role in developing the country . In this modern era of sex equality , women are also leading the government management in some countries . Women have valuable experiences that men do not have which can be shared for the development of society and country . They can create a more progressive and harmonic society as men have done .

  In a nutshell , women should not quit their job after their first delivery because they can financially support the family , having finance independent as well as they can also contribute to the development of the country . Last words , women should take a small break after their first delivery for providing a better physical and mental development of baby as they are the most intimate person to their children .

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