Monday, 15 April 2013

OPINION ESSAY


Case Of Burglary That Increase Gradually


Have your house being broke in before? Nowadays, breaking into house is a common criminal that occurs in Malaysia. Based on the statistics of crime, the case house broken is spreading all over the state in Malaysia.The following paragraphs are about reasons why most houses were broken in, the effects of this crime towards our country and ways to prevent the problems from spreading.

There are few reasons why most of the houses were broken in. Firstly, it is because of the houses were not locked properly. Sometimes most of us did not notice that we do not lock the house as we think that it has actually locked. Other than that, most of the houses do not have security system. Nowadays, security system is the most important featured that we should have in our house. By having this security system like using smart alarm, the case of burglary can be reduced and our houses will be in safe condition.

If this crime increased year by year, there are many effects that happened towards our country. One of the effect are our country, Malaysia will be looked down by other country. This is because other country will have bad impressions towards Malaysia as the records of crime in Malaysia increased yearly. They will blame our leader for not being able to conduct the country in a harmony way. Besides that, the economy of our country will be decrease gradually. This is due to the lower numbers of youngsters that can contribute to our economy as most of them were sentenced to jail because of this crime.

Nevertheless, there are also few ways that can be carried out to prevent these problems  from spreading. One of the ways are the criminals should be sentenced to a heavy punishment. In example, they should be sentenced to death as the punishment. By carrying out this way, many people out there will be scared to break into other's houses because they did not want to die. Secondly, the owner of every house in a Malaysia should increase the security system in their house. They should use a more efficient security system in their house. Even though this method are costly, it is necessary as our life with our loved ones are safe.

To conclude my essay, I can say that most of the houses were broken in because most of us did not lock our house properly and the security system is too bad. In my opinion, all houses should pay more attention towards security system in their house by adding smart alarm in their house. It does not matter if it costly because we can live in a safe life compared to our live living in fear.

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