Saturday, 13 April 2013

Argumentative essay...


Task : Women should quit their job after their first delivery of baby . Do you agree or not ? Write a suitable title and framework for your essay .

Quiting From Jobs After First Delivery Of Baby Among  Women In Malaysia

            Should the women quit their jobs after their first baby delivery? To me, I agree that the women should quit their jobs after their first baby delivery. The women should quit their jobs after their first baby delivery because of their partner, finance and health.

             There are few reasons why the women should consider about their partner. Most life partner will ask their women to quit their jobs after considering many risk if they continue to work. Sincerely, it is true the women may contribute family’s income, but other risks will make this reason is just nothing. Besides that, this condition also may lead to an arguement with your partner and cause bad condition in relationship.

            Next, there are few reasons why the women should consider about their finance.It will cost more to hire a babysitter. Besides that, women also will never know what happen to your babies without their mothers. If suddenly something bad happened, the adding cost will cause more expenses in family financial. So, it is the best to look your babies by your own and quit after first delivery.

Other than that, there are also few reasons why the women should consider about their health. First delivery is the first time for women to face too much pain in giving birth. So, they are urged to concern on their health and take their leisure time for resting themselves than going back to work. Besides that, the babies can have their mom at their side more often.

In the nutshell, women should quit their jobs after their first baby delivery so that they can take care about their family and live happily. I hope that the women will agree to quit their jobs after their first delivery and become a great wife and mother to their family.


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