Task : Women should quit
their job after their first delivery of baby . Do you agree or not ? Write a
suitable title and framework for your essay .
Career vs
wife
If you are women ,will you quit your jobs after the first delivery of baby? Many people agreed that women should
quit after first delivery and I’m also one who agreed with that opinion. The
following paragraph are about why women work, negative effect when they work and benefit when
women quit after first delivary of baby.
Data showed that women who prefer to continue
working life after first delivery will face many problems; babies welfare and
health condition. This is a few negative effect when they work. First delivery is the first time
for women to face too much pain in giving birth. they are urger to concern on
their health and take their leisure time for rest theirselves; than back to
work. Besides that, the babies can have their mom at their side more often but
if their mom still continue to work, the mother not pay attention to her baby. She also more spend her time at
work than home.
Reason
why women continue work when first delivery baby. They work to get money and
get better life.Considering about the finance, it will cost more to hire a
babysitter. Besides, you will never know what happen to your babies without
their mothers. If suddenly something bad happened, the adding cost will cause
more expenses in family financial.they also try to improve the soft skills that
they learn. So it is the best to look your babies by your own and quit after
first delivery.
There are a few benefits when women quit
their jobs after their first delivery of baby.Thinking about partner’s opinion.
Most life partners will ask women to quit; after considering many risk if they
continue to work. Sincerely, it is true the women may contribute family’s
income, but other risks will make this reason is just nothing. Besides that,
this condition may lead to an arguement with your partner and cause bad
condition in relationship.when quitting
we can have more time with our baby and see their progress with our own
eyes.the mother also will give more commitment toward her family.
As conclusion, women should think
about quitting their job after first delivery, in order to maintain positive
finance, career and relationship with your partner. There have many reason why
women doesn’t want to quit,and will give negative effects to her life.
The benefit comes when women quit their jobs.
FATIN AZUREEN BINTI AZAHARI
19341
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