Sunday, 14 April 2013

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Task 1 : 
Women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby. Do you agree or not? Write suitable title and framework of your essay.



The Pros And Cons For Women Quitting Their Jobs After Giving Birth

     Should career women quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby? If I were asked with this question, my opinion is career women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby. The following paragraphs are about the advantages for women quitting their jobs after giving birth, the disadvantages for women who return to their works after giving birth and the effect towards the baby if the women return to work.

     There are few advantages for women quitting their jobs after their first delivery. First of all, they can give their full attention towards their baby as the baby are growing up and need lots of attention and loves from their parents. Most social problems that occurred nowadays are because of children whose parents were busy with their work. So they tried to do something that can attract their parents’s attention. Besides that, if women choose to quit their jobs, they can give their baby an informal educations which starts from house rather than let their baby stayed in nursery. They can trained their baby to be discipline and also, they do not have to worry about their baby’s health as they can treat their baby on their own.

     On the other hand, there are some disadvantages for women who return to their career after their first delivery. The disadvantages are their time management will be packed as they need to spend time with working and taking care of their baby. For career women, they should know how to manage their time wisely so that they can balance their time between working and family matters. They will be more tired compared to women who are not working. However, women who returns to work after their first delivery will earn extra money for their family’s financial. But, as we all know that money cannot replace everything. If they went to work and left their baby to babysitter and something bad happens, they cannot pay with their money.

     Other than that, the effect that the baby might face if women returns to work is the baby might feel lack of love from their mother as they cannot spend most of their time with their mother. As I said in the previous paragraph, children that growth with lack of loves from their parents will tried to do something that will lead to social problems to catch their parents’s attention. Nevertheless, baby from a working mother can be more independent than the baby who was pampered by their parents all the times. However, no matter how independent a children might be, they still need to be under their parents guidance.

     As a conclusion, career women should quit their jobs after giving birth to their first baby so that they can spend most of their times with the baby and gives them full attention and loves. I hope one day all women in this world will stop working and pay more attention towards their family and let the men to work out and earn money for their living.

FATIN NABILAH BINTI SABRI
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