Wednesday, 17 April 2013

ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY


WOMEN SHOULD QUIT THEIR JOBS AFTER THEIR FIRST DELIVERY OF BABY

Why the women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby? I agree that the women should quit their job after first delivery of baby. The following paragraphs are about the effects to the women if they continue their jobs, the careness of the baby should be perfect enough and the cost to pay the baby sitter to look after their baby.
First of all, I would like to talk about the effects to the women if they continue their jobs. The first effect is healthy. Every women, after their first delivery of baby, they will lose lots of energy. They could not do their work without enough energy. They must take care about their healthy after delivery of baby. Besides that, they will also have a problem about their emotion. This can be prove when they must look after their baby at the same time they do not have enough energy to take care their baby.
The second one is the careness of the baby should be perfect enough. The women must take care of their baby with lovely. The healthy of their baby must be in good condition. The women must give their breast milk to their baby because the milk that contain in the body of women have lot of proteins for the growth of the baby. So, the condition of the baby will be in normal condition.
After that, if the women continue their job after delivery of baby, they will pay the baby sitter to look after their baby. The problem is the cost to pay the baby sitter to look after their baby. Today, most of kindergarden was increasing the payment of the baby sitter. So,the cost to pay the baby sitter to look after their baby becomes more expensive. If the women quit their jobs after delivery of baby and take care of their baby, they do not need to pay the baby sitter to look after their baby. They can save the money to buy the things that need for the baby such as clothes, milk and another else.
As conclusion, the women should quit their jobs after first delivery of baby and give their attention to their baby 100% and also take care of the baby lovely.



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