ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Focusing on Family After First Delivery of Baby

                   Have you given birth of a baby? I agreed that women should quit their job after first delivery of baby and focus on the family. The following paragraphs are about the advantages of why women should quit from job after giving birth of first baby, effects of quitting job and reasons why women love to quit after delivering the first baby.

                   There are the advantages why women should quit from the job after giving birth of first baby. First of all, an advantage is women can do the housework easily without any obstacles. There is no distraction or problem can be faced by the women when they are quitting the job and focus on the family. Secondly, the advantage is women can teach their baby to be a marvellous child. This is important for the baby to get or obtain basic knowledge in childhood.

                   Furthermore, there are a few effects of quitting job for women after delivering the first baby.

Quitting from job is the best way for women who had married. Some women think they shall focus on their family. Nevertheless, quitting from job makes women will lose their career. Beside that, quitting from job is such a right way for women after delivering the first baby. Somesay women can teach their baby and become a good and responsible housewife. In other hand, all the studies in the university are wasted.

                   Moreover, there are a few reasons why women love to quit job after delivering the first baby. Firstly, women want to give full attention and commitment towards the family. Without women's commitment. family institution will be gone. Furthermore, women want to help their husband based on finance way. There is because when women are quitting from job, they do not need maid and their financial will be increased.

                   Nowadays, most women who had delivered their first baby decided to quit from the job. I fully agreed with this case because women could concentrate to their life with family. If i were married and have given a first baby, I will quit from job.

NORFATIN NAJWA BINTI MOHD FUAD
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