ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

Title: The Importance Career Among Women

Should you as a woman to let your career over after first delivery? I disagree with the statement that the women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby. The following paragraphs are about the importance women’s job on family, nation, and worldwide.

          The women’s job are very important especially to the family even after first delivery. Women can gain some experiences and earn some extra money for their family eventhough their husband is the person who is responsible to take care about finance of the family. They can also share the experiences with their children so that they can choose the right path for their future later.

          Moreover, they can serve their expertise to the nation. When they have a great job, they can contribute their expertise and influence to the country. There is a rumor that the peoples give more attention to the men because they are brave enough than a women. In their eyes women are well-known as a soft-hearted. They are easily symphaty to the peoples.

          Then, when they have a great job especially at the foreign lands, they become a pride of the family for never giving up to support her. The women should not quit their jobs because they can help the country to be known in the worldwide like the developed countries. They can also take an example story from politician who is well-known by the worldwide, Aung San Suu Kyi.

          In my opinion, the women should have their own job eventhough they have a family. Futhermore, they have also to balance between the jobs and the family because the family are also the importance matters.  

NUR HIDAYAH BINTI MAHADI

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