ARGUMENTATIVE ESSAY

WOMAN QUITTING JOB AFTER FIRST DELIVERY.

            Should woman quit after giving her first birth? Many people agree that women should quit after first delivery and I am also one who agree with that opinion. Women should quit their jobs after their first delivery of baby because they have to manage their health, financial and serious consideration towards her first baby.

            A research has been conducted and it is said that women who quit job after delivering first birth will live healthy. This is because, women that have job will have many things to be done perfectly. They have to manage their child daily and at the same time, they have to work on their job too. This will cause the women to get exhausted and do not have much time to get enough rest. As a result, the women will have low level of healthiness. In conclusion, women should quit after first delivery to maintain their healthiness through the day.

            Financial also influenced by the women status after first delivery. If the women still working, probably they want to hire a babysitter to make sure her child is well-managed, but they need to choose a truely kind babysitter bacause nowaday there are many reports on children abused. Hiring the babysitter will cause the women to provide monthly salary to the babysitter. It is better for the women to watch after her child so that they can save their money for the child’s future and also the baby safety. In the nutshell, women must quit after giving first delivery because it can help them to save a lot of money that can be used for other things.

            Women also must pay full attention to their baby in order to give informal education to the child. Informal education is important to broaden the child mind during infant until they become adult. The attention from the mother will show a love from the mother and the child which can achieve if the mother is not working. If women does not take a serious consideration to their child, the child will become wild and lack of mother’s love. In conclusion, women should quit after first delivery to ensure their child get enough attention and love from their mother.

            In the nutshell, women should quit their job after first delivery of baby to ensure they have good health, have good financial status and give their full attention to the child. Women can not be a selfish mother, they also need to think about their first child, because child is an award from God.

AHMAD EL AFIFY BIN MOHD SAFRI

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